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Author: Antoine R. Dumont (@ardumont) <antoine.romain.dumont@gmail.com>
Date: Wed Apr 1 16:28:50 2020 +0200
docs/data-model: Update visits chapter definition
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| 146 | Those are currently mutable visits and indeed, it's not explicited. | |
"Every time" means "à chaque fois", it's not about timestamps, so the new phrasing is clunky.
I think you should keep the old phrasing, and add your new sentence. Also mention the name "update" in there.
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Date: Wed Apr 1 16:28:50 2020 +0200
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Author: Antoine R. Dumont (@ardumont) <antoine.romain.dumont@gmail.com>
Date: Wed Apr 1 16:28:50 2020 +0200
docs/data-model: Update visits chapter definition
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Related to T2310See https://jenkins.softwareheritage.org/job/DMOD/job/tests-on-diff/27/ for more details.
Possessive forms bar's foo are harder to read than their foo of bar counterparts, and should generally be avoided, when bar is an inanimate object.
I propose:
..note:: This model currently records visits as a single point in time. However, the actual visit process is not instantaneous. Loaders can record successive changes to the state of the visit, as their work progresses, as updates to the visit object.
Possessive forms bar's foo are harder to read than their foo of bar counterparts, and should generally be avoided, when bar is an inanimate object.
I did not know that.
Thanks.
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Date: Wed Apr 1 16:28:50 2020 +0200
docs/data-model: Update visits chapter definition
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Author: Antoine R. Dumont (@ardumont) <antoine.romain.dumont@gmail.com>
Date: Wed Apr 1 16:28:50 2020 +0200
docs/data-model: Update visits chapter definition
Hinting at the origin_visit_update model
Related to T2310See https://jenkins.softwareheritage.org/job/DMOD/job/tests-on-diff/32/ for more details.